The Oort Perimeter
Earthfleet Saga #1
Let me start out by saying that I did NOT finish this, so maybe it gets better, but I really doubt it.
Now, my complaints:
everybody “smirked” and did things “slyly”. Seriously. By the 2nd chapter, or whatever, I was so sick of those words, I was ready to toss my reader out the window.
This guy needs to learn to write better! This was a free download and while I appreciate the effort the guy put into writing this, it needs serious help. I certainly won’t be reading any more of his stuff.